Pon Farr Huh?

I finally finished this! I've only been working on it for a couple months now. (Because I'm so lazy.)

I kinda rushed through the last of it, so I don't really know if I approve of how it turned out.

Anyway, Spock is disgruntled, Kirk is being a tease, and Bones is ticked off. What else is new?

So, please give some critique and tell me what you think!

(PS, I love the concept of Pon Farr to death. <3)